初二英语作文 帮我修改一下`

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帮我修改一下~有些句子
原文：
Deng Yaping was born on the 2nd of June,1973.She started to play table tennis when she was five years old.She was very interested in playing the game.In 1983,she joined the Henan table tennis team.There she became famous.When she was only 15 years old,she joined the national table tennis team.In 1997,she went to Tsinghua University,majored in English and management.She was number I women's singles player in the ITTF from 1993 to 1998.For quite a few times,she won the first prize in the world's table tennis competition.
【把这篇文章改一下，简单一点~像初二学生的水平，像1993——1998那里，就可以用Keep】
句子多用when和at
【谢了，好的话一定加分】
发答案之前请检查一遍~
谢了

您好！作为同样是初二学生的我，有公共英语三级的水平，希望可以帮助到你！
Deng Yaping was born on the 2nd of June,1973.She started to play table tennis when she was five years old.She was interested in playing the game.In 1983,she joined the Henan table tennis team.There she became famous.When she was only 15 years old,she joined the national table tennis team.In 1997,she went to Tsinghua University,majored in English and management.She was number one women's singles player in the ITTF from 1993 to 1998.For quite a few times,she won the first prize in the world's table tennis competition.

文章很完美，只是个别单词有些重复。属于初二水平。我能帮到你的只有这些了。希望您可以找到自己称心的答案

Dengyaping was born in 6,February,1973.She began to play table tennis when she was five years old.In 1983,she joined the table tennis team of Henian Province.She was selected to the national table tennis team when she was 15.She was strict to herself,so she trained very hard.This spirit is worth studying .

或者用下面这个
Deng yaping was born on F